Wednesday, 12 December 2012

daring doo fan fic some of chapter 1

So the chapter editer is glitchy right now so i need somewhere to store it for a bit so here it is:

                                                     
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                                                 [b][u]Daring-Do and the Griffon's Goblet[/u][/b]
                                                                         [b][u]Chapter 1[/u][/b]

Daring Woke at a start sweating heat surrouned her sweating remembering the cursed black words a few months back when she took the Relic from a long lost temple she almost drownded in "I WILL GET YOU DARING DOO" she lay feeling the comfort of the bed lay against her mane she tryed to stand but stumbled and regained Her footing she trotted downstairs and ordered some breakfast but before she went she pulls out the relic "so much more to do" she finished and but on her coat and her light gray hat
"May i have some cider Please?" she asked
"Yes you may it is a great honor to have you here"
 "Thanks" Daring Reply While slipping on the last of her drink
"Another" she says excited this time the bartender brings two Ciders
"here a toast to Daring doo! The brave pony!"
"heh thanks but really it was no problem" daring said
"really you have done us great i hop you have a long life" the bartender said
"to you to but i have to go im afread" the mare said
Daring stood up and started heading for the door
"but i really gotta go these mysteries are not gonna find themselves will they?
As daring opens the door she is blinded by the bright sun
"holy celesta the sun sure is bright today" Daring says blinded by the light
"Thank the pony gods your alive daring i was worry when you
Told me You went even though i told you not to" Some pony said
Without saying a word daring wrapped her hoves around the strange white and black striped pony
As he returns the hug
The mare let go of the big colt
"its nice to see you conner again but why are here?" she asked
"to find out if you were OK once i heard you went without me i got worried
"how did you know where to find me?" she asked with a puzzled face
"once i heard you were here from a old colt i started my way over are you done with your quests?" he asked
"not yet i was just about to head over to the museum care to join me?" she asked
"sure i would love to" he gritty followed
"you know you really dont need to" the mare said
"really you invited me maybe i didnt even want to come"
"yet you still are here if you wanted to leave you would have already am i not right or do you have a response for that to" the mare asked
"well"
"thats what i thought" still standing at the front of the door
"maybe we should uh move?"the colt asked
"yeah that would be a good idea"
"you think"
"what do you want me to say"
"um i agree lets go!"
"i wouldnt say it like that!"
"what would you then"
"LETS GET THE HELL OUT OF HERE!"
"that was good"
"can we go now?"
"yeah i guess"
the mare and the colt finally head out on to the streets and the first thing they saw was mares and colts everywhere left right and center.


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"we need to stop fools and capture daring doo! wahtever the cost!" the colt says
The colt Rises his hoof
"but first we must find the map to find the griffins goblet" he yells
"if she gets in our way we smash her like bees
"this time is our time!"
"OK i think that is good" while looking at a mirror
"let the guests in at once we have a plan to plan!" the dark master says
"at once master"
"we got a mare and colt to deal with"
dermare walked out onto the stand in front of all his followers
"um"
"uh"
"THIS GUY IS TERRIBLE WHY ARE WE EVEN HERE?"
"yeah" a another colt yelled
"come on sit down now we all now that daring are her little sidekick have been messing with our plans its time to put them down forever"
"YEAH"
"prepare code six and five and meet back here in an hour!"
the colt walked off stage
"how did i do?" he asked
"good sir very good"

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"so been seeing any other mares?" daring asked
"Of course NOT"
"right so you haven't changed at all over the time i have been gone?" she asked while walking
"no its not that i cant its just you know stuff" he said putting his head down
"nah i'm just bothering you come on zeesh we both know you cant pick up any other mares" she said "hey there it is in all its glory" she said pointing at the museum daring and conner entered the museum
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"sir they just entered the museum whats our orders?"
"stay there ill join you in a bit" the colt ordered
"yes sir i will remain keeping watch"
"good"
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back inside the museum.....
"well if you came for dinosaurs you sure did find them" he said
"ha ha so funny look over there! that's what we are after!" she said pointing her hoof at a glass case
"a glass box daring" he said
"yes but inside it contains a map that will lead us to the griffon's goblet" she said while trying to crack open the case
"The Griffins goblet?" he asked
"yes Conner the griffins goblet something we are both after" the commander said standing at the entrance of the museum
" Commander Dermare forget it your not getting your hoofs of this map" the mare said still trying to get the case open untill she was breathing hard
"daring let me help you out" Conner said kicking the case with his back hoofs shattering the glass in a single blow
daring quickly grabbed the map
"give me the map daring and ill let you two live" Dermare Says
"Never!" the mare says trying to figure out a way out Conner and daring get backed in to a corner
"any last words daring?" Conner  asked
"none other then run!" right after she says that they bolt across the room only to be trapped
"another way out?" the colt asked
"i don't know" still looking for a way out
"OK that's it give me the map or else!" Demare Yelled stepping slowly towards daring and Conner
"Thats it" daring wispered
"Whats it?" the colt asked wonding what she was doing
daring removed her hat and wished she didnt miss this shot she took the hat and tossed it towards the fire alarm
BRING BRING BRING the sound rang though there ears wishing it would stop now was the time to escape daring and Conner made a dash for the door BANG they were on the cool night streets with raindrops hitting there manes
"quick this way" daring said and started to run clop clop clop the sound of there hoofs could be heard from miles away it seemed they turned there heads to see that there pursues were still after them
"how do we lose these guys" the cold wet colt asked
"over here" she said pointing at a caredge they quickly jumped in the back and said
"we will pay later get us out of here!"
"uh"
"just shut up and drive!" she ordered
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the drips of the rain could be heard from inside the safe house of the colt
daring collapsed on the bed
"oh man they sure could they run"
"yeah you could have just flied away you know" he said
"didn't wanna ditch my old friend again that would be rude" she says
"well yeah wouldn't want little old me to cry would we?"
"yeah wouldn't want you to melt" she said trying to keep a straight face
"well ms doo" the colt said
"Oh no here comes a speech" see said covering her ears
"not likely! anyways lets take a look at that map shall we?" he said grabbing the map from the mare
"looks like we have a bit of a travel on our hoofs
"yeah tomorrow  we head to get resources for the trip" she said trying not to drift off to sleep
"we both should get some rest" the colt said
in ten minutes they wore both fast asleep
"now that im lieing in bed im not tired anymore"
"me to what do you want to do?"
"got any bored games" she asked
"no"

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the shining light woke both the colt and the mare both shivered at the cool of the morning
"rise and shine sleepy head" the mare yelled into his ear
"WOOHA"
"dude calm down since we want to move as fast as we can i brought up breakfast" she said holding on to two trays of food
"oh thanks"
knock knock knock three knocks at the door acted like a silencer no pony moved two more knocks came knock knock still no pony moved after five long seconds Knock down the door went and appearing at the door was an old friend
" its not nice to ignore the door daring!"
"its been a while daring" dermane said walking slowly into the room
"no more cheep tricks to get you out of this one sadly give me the map" he asked edging choicer to her
"stay back ill rip the map!" she said holding the map with her two hoofs
"you wouldn't do that we both know that!" still moving toward her
"im warning you" the mare warned
"trust me you wouldn't do that then you wouldn't know where it is ether"
daring put her hoof on her head "its all up here" she said cockily
"you dont want to do this daring we both know you still love me"
"i was childish back then and i know what i have to do its ether you let me and my buddy leave or the map goes up in smoke and you have no way of knowing where the goblet is" she said Lightning flashed, briefly illuminating the landscape of the rainy outside world daring was hoping to get to
the sound of a train going by could be heard no pony said anything until dermare broke the silence
"fine we will leave this time but remember we will that goblet with or without that map" she said with a snare
daring and Conner watched as they left the room and listened to the slow clopping noises that could be heard one stair two stair three stair daring turned to Conner and just before she said something a scream came from downstairs
"lets go" daring said running out the door so fast it hit Conner on the way out "owww" the colt yelled
daring took the last step on the stairs to see that the bartender was being held
"if you wont give me that map then i mite as well start going to the top without the goblet now tell me are you prepared to see a pony such as Innocent as this one die?" there was a long silence before Conner joined them
"your not getting that map! we already" he was cut off by daring who stuck her hoof in his mouth
" if i give you the map will you back off and let us all go?" she asked
"yes" he said
"promise?" the mare asked
the colt signed "promise"
"hmmm maybe we should shake on it" she said walking up to him "how bout it?" she asked
"who knows where those hoofs as been in dirty sand? maybe stealing hoofs?"
"that's behind us now deal or no deal?"
"i think we have drew this out for far two long wouldn't you say daring?" he asked
"im gonna give you five seconds"
"whats the differences between us?" he asked
"five"
"what are ponys even doing on this world the old gods surely dont want us here"
"four"
"this counting is foolish"
"three"
"stop your embarrassing your self"
"two"
"really?"
"one"
"442343254325"
daring pulls the map out of her hat and opens it she starts the tare it when
"NOOOOOO ok ok you win" darmare yelled
"ill shake"
the two shock hands and daring handed over the map
"YES YOU HAVE NO IDEA WHAT YOU HAVE DONE DARING DOO" he yelled
he danced out the door singing a catchy song
daring turned to her friend who had a puzzled face
"grab your stuff we are leaving"
Conner snapped out of confusion and followed daring into the room
"i need you to go into the bar and ask for supply's ok?" she told him  
"yeah yeah i got it" he said still looking dazed
daring grabbed anything and everything she could
"ok ready to get going?"
"where are we going?" the colt asked
"to go get our map back! what else" the mare said proudly
"we have no clue where they could be holding up!" the colt said
" oh i have a few places in mind where they mite be at"
"i hope your right" the colt said
" i hope we are not to late" the mare said
"here get on my back" she said
" you cant carry me!"he said
" yes i can"
the colt climbed on the mares back and daring started to move faster and faster dodging ponys left right and center from colts to mares until she slowly raised into the air
"why didn't we do this in the first place?" the colt asked but there was no response from daring
"hey listen if you need a break im ok with that"
"im fine" she gasped
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"Commander whats our orders?" the young colt asked
"Well, look who we have here! If it isn't the infamous Daring-Do, raider of ancient tombs, robber of invaluable artifacts" a worker said looking at a poster of daring
"shut up shes not infamous shes a pain now go get supply's for the trip and stop standing there doing nothing and acting like you are worth something your not now get moving" the commander ordered
"sir yes sir i have no life and i should kill my self" a troop says
darmare opens the map and examines it
"do we have a setting sir?"
"due north lets hope daring doo got held up by something" the commander said
"yes it would be really bad"
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"we are almost there" daring said as slowly falling asleep slowly falling down until Crash just before they made contact with the ground she could hear the colt yelling "pull up pull up!"
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"daring wake up!" Conner was yelling in her ear " we got problems" shaking her over and over trying to get her back to reality
"huh" daring said stupidly
daring stood up and looked at the big furry stinky beast standing in front of her her mouth wide open
"what is that"
"i don't know" he said
"old friend?"
"nope i would know" the mare said still with her mouth dropped
"you are aware your mouth is wide open" he asked
"oops it is" she said blushing
"oh now your face is going red"
"hey shut up and lets worry on the task at hand shall we?" the mare asked
"agreed" the colt said
"what do you suggest we do you have a plan right" he asked with no reply "you always have a plan!"
with out a word daring jumped into the fight removing her hat and throwing it
"what are you doing" the colt asked
after ten long seconds the hat did not return
"i must have missed" the mare exclaimed
"well now what"
the beast looked like it was getting ready to charge into them
"we have to do SOMETHING" the colt said
"YOUR NOT GOING ANY FARTHER"
"ummm daring can we uh you know run?" the colt asked
"No We stay and fight" the mare says

                                                    Thanks for reading chapter one of this book i hope you guys will enjoy chapter 2
when it gets out for you guys im taking a short break now cya guys in a few days for more of this story it may take me longer to get out this is a short chapter all the others will be longer follow me on twitter here tharyn9 youtube tharyn9 and google plus is the same as all the others as well please leave suggestons to make it better as my friends will be reviewing it the mare the marryier cant spell today sorry!


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